Tuesday, November 8, 2011


The Haldia Local ………


The ‘Haldia Local’ begins its journey on a strict disciplinary note,
Not accelerating to its capacity in just one stroke.

The train then swiftly approaches the station Bandar,
Proudly announcing its arrival with a thunder.

The train further bids goodbye to I.O.C.L, Tata Power and Exide,
The rapid and swaying motion clearly demonstrates its pride.

The first rays of the sun then express its soothening arrival,
The green field’s vista in the background aids in mood revival.

The hot Panskura chop puts us into mouth watering plight,
Sipping hot lemon tea alongside adds to the delight.

The mind gets refreshed by the river Rupnarayan’s cool blowing breeze,
But the scramble rush of people at Bagnan puts the passengers at unease.

While all other available eatables, vary with their nearby stations,
The majestic ‘Jhalmuri’ remains ever at our disposition.


The train is no less than a moving market,
With each vendor having different products up his closet.

Their inventive advertising chimes are a bit too strange,
With books, pens, combs, oranges………., they almost have everything in their range.

When the journey finally nears its completion,
The train slowly approaches Howrah station.

Till now the train considered itself to be a valiant knight,
But it enters Howrah station just as a bride enters the room on first night.

As soon as the train reaches the platform shores,
The ever busy people don’t have the time to wait any more.

People scamper towards the door, to set out for their tasks,
While the train stands relaxed on the platform to bask.

Hardly after bidding goodbye to all its passengers,
The train sets out for its next adventure.

Love
Abhishek Singh  

6 comments:

  1. This poem is dedicated to all my friends at H.I.T. Haldia ,
    who consider 'Haldia Local' to be a part of their lives.

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  2. Awesome idea..... i m bound to says..." Wat an IDEA sirjee" . Nearly everyone has traveled HALDIA LOCAL bt no one wud hav ever imagined that its journey can so poetic.

    you have connected the beauty of journey and the problems so well that one wud have to think twice before judging whether the journey of haldia local is gud or bad.

    I see gr8 future of urs dude.....i wud lik to see more from you

    all the best for future....

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  3. Upar ke comment mein says ke jagah say hoga...

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  4. Are yaar jaldi mein galti ho jata hai..... comment mein bhawana samjho shabdon mein kya rkha hai

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  5. No new words for P.K. ...............Thank you friend.....

    I must confess that your encouragement is one vital parameter that drives me do better.

    Thanks once again.

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  6. most welcome singh ....
    but one more thing i wud lik to specify that ur new default template i.e. magazine is difficult to open wen the speed of net is slow....plz change it into either classic or some other view so that its easier to read ur poem in slow net speed

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